5. Office Hours/Student Hours

A. Evidence of meeting with your professor (Esther Lee) or DS (Loisa Chen) during office hours or tutoring hours.

B. Write a brief summary of the meeting. What was your takeaway from the experience? 

After my each draft of the paper is completed, I will schedule an asynchronous feedback appointment with Loisa. 

In paper 1, through Loisa's feedback, I found that I had many problems in my writing, such as punctuation and fanboys. In addition, I learned how to correctly quote an in-text citation in the paper and how to match the topic sentences and the conclusion sentences.

In paper 2, I learned about comma splices and runs-on, which gave me a better understanding of how to use punctuation. In the paper 2, my writing improved a little bit, and I learned the technique of matching the topic sentence with the conclusion sentence. I also learned how to write a thesis statement.

In paper 3, I learned how to use library resources to find references that fit the content of my paper. When I was writing the second body paragraph, I found that I couldn’t find a suitable citation in the class resources, so I went to the library website to look for other resources.

I really appreciate Loisa. Thanks her for helping me