Friday, June 6, 2025

7. Paper 1 - Include the first draft and the final draft with a reflection on your writing process. Share a meaningful lesson from this process.

 Paper 1 first draft 




Paper 1 final draft








On my paper 1 writing process, I think my language was informal and not academic. There are many punctuation errors in this paper, and the structure is not perfect either. Lack of transition words and coordinating conjunctions in sentences.

This is my first time writing an English paper in MLA format, which i didn't know before, and I used in-text citation to share my personal understanding of the American Dream. I use quotes from books and articles to prove my viewpoint. I learned and thought about the American Dream.

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