Friday, June 6, 2025

9. Paper 3 - Include the first draft and the final draft with a reflection on your writing process. Share a meaningful lesson from this process.

 Paper 3 first draft





Paper 3 final draft








I have to say that paper 3 was a little bit difficult for me. I misunderstood the topic of the paper 3 at the beginning. The question I chose to answer was "What do you think are the greatest concerns in regard to immigration?" I thought I needed to write about the concerns of immigrants, but I should write about is what concerns Americans have when it comes to the topic of immigration. Thus, I encountered difficulties in per-writing at the beginning. After communicating with Ms Lee in class, I finally understood what I needed to write.

In Paper 3, the most meaningful thing I learned was how to search for resources on the library website to prove my own point of view. When I wrote about cultural issues, I found that the class resources mainly focused on economic issues, and did not focus on culture, so I went to the library website to find a video about cultural issues, and cited it in my paper. This technique helped me a lot in my writing and made my paper more convincing.

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